Self-Critique
1. Who were the sources?
My dad, Aunt Suzanne, Aunt Deana, and Uncle Kenny were the sources.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
I talk about family in my story, and was defines being family. The struggle of having multiple parents, step of half siblings used to be a huge issue mainly for my dad and Aunt Suzanne. It has grown to not be as big of an issue now today but some people would still consider them not 'real' siblings. Though they grew up and were taught just like to b siblings like anyone else.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
There are 31 paragraphs in my story.
4. How many words is the story?
There are 753 words in my story.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 15 direct quotes in this story.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
There are four different people quoted in my story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
I think that the last one was so that's why I put it there.“I don’t think that being blood related makes a difference at all,” said Chad. “Because there are people that are blood related and aren’t close and don’t talk at all. We have as normal as a relationship as anyone else would’ve had.”
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
The quote is located at the very end of the story.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes, I think that the lede effectively capture the readers attention.
10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
I would have interviewed the mom (my grandmother).
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
Yes the story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
Maybe a little more about how they are all related , but I'm not sure if its confusing to other people because I already know how.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
"What are Family Bonds Made of?"
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I like how it turned out, I need tome a couple of changes but haven't been able to work because my computer is broken. I was so happy to get to talk and interview my family in Pittsburgh because I only get to see them once a year.
15. Give yourself a self grade from 0-100
Right now a 85 because I know that there are things I need to fix.
My dad, Aunt Suzanne, Aunt Deana, and Uncle Kenny were the sources.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
I talk about family in my story, and was defines being family. The struggle of having multiple parents, step of half siblings used to be a huge issue mainly for my dad and Aunt Suzanne. It has grown to not be as big of an issue now today but some people would still consider them not 'real' siblings. Though they grew up and were taught just like to b siblings like anyone else.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
There are 31 paragraphs in my story.
4. How many words is the story?
There are 753 words in my story.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 15 direct quotes in this story.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
There are four different people quoted in my story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
I think that the last one was so that's why I put it there.“I don’t think that being blood related makes a difference at all,” said Chad. “Because there are people that are blood related and aren’t close and don’t talk at all. We have as normal as a relationship as anyone else would’ve had.”
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
The quote is located at the very end of the story.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes, I think that the lede effectively capture the readers attention.
10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
I would have interviewed the mom (my grandmother).
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
Yes the story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
Maybe a little more about how they are all related , but I'm not sure if its confusing to other people because I already know how.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
"What are Family Bonds Made of?"
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I like how it turned out, I need tome a couple of changes but haven't been able to work because my computer is broken. I was so happy to get to talk and interview my family in Pittsburgh because I only get to see them once a year.
15. Give yourself a self grade from 0-100
Right now a 85 because I know that there are things I need to fix.
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